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Old 07-27-2006, 01:58 PM   #17 (permalink)
LoneStrider
 
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Nice contest, monkster!

gonna write meself a nice one!

Now, Behold!


Walking down the graveyard,
you feel brave.
as long as its light,
you are still safe.

A rose in you hand,
a nice gift
for late gran.
thinking of her, you drift.

While praying for her,
you feel the earth shake.
'Nevermind', you think
its just a fake.

Putting down the rose,
on here dead ground,
a hand manicingly arose
with terrifying sound!

You stumble back,
and you nearly flipped
as your granny starts
to climb out of her crypt!

Clothes torn apart,
and one eye missing.
You get a faint heart,
when you hear her hissing.

'Gran, its me!' you yell.
she turns around,
and you know too well,
that trouble's abound.

She looks deadly at the rose,
and soon after, it began to smoke.
'Poof', it said quick,
leaving a crater in the bricks.

Cackling something foul,
and the ground shakes through.
Your skin starts to crawl,
it feels like a dejavu.

Critters rise from everywhere,
deadly gazing at you.
A stench fills the air.
Still you know what to do.

You run and hide,
find something that saves.
But everytime you tried,
the only thing here, are graves.

Coming even more close
you think why your kin,
Like her appearance shows,
has such a demon within.

'Your mine!', she says with a shriek.
When your finally caught,
beginning to feel weak.
your fleeing was for naught.

Everything turns dark.
the sounds fade away
you see a spark
then you pray.

You open up one eye,
and see the sun.
Along with a beautiful sky,
where did it all begun?

You wait for that creep,
Did it really take place?
I probably fell asleep,
as you rest your case.

You pick yourself up,
feeling in your veins,
when you stumble back home,
just a little bit of craving...

For brains.



Kinda made me laugh how it turned out!






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LOL? 1500th post!
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