Well, it’s a poem, and so I’d have read it2 or 3 times and think a Wheel-Not really believing it.
I was told it’s a riddle. And also told I was wrong. It’s still a poem.
1) “except I will” made it sound like this “object”-Wheel, Air…..This all encompassing thing-is bragging to the point it makes decisions. Just didn’t feel right so “unless I am” can be expressed “except I will”
2) “object”-Exist in our garden- (realm) 3) “measure”-(worth) “object” Saying “you can’t set a value” (and I think looking for props In lines 3&4.
4) “hundreds” feels like a downplay-It’s a poem it needs to flow
“hundreds” Can mean all as in the line before fore ALL I care.
Bragging, Hiding
5) “compass” and lines 7&8 w/”except I will” giving yet another feeling like you sit still and I moves-Earth, Globe. (before “unless I am” and “garden”- realm).
Circumference (after “unless I am”1) and 2) “garden”- realm).
Things are looking ROUND.
6) “almost every” was murder until I got “garden” is realm,-ok domaination isn’t a word should have typed domain… or domination…
Once Circumference was wrong things started to open up, I was analyzing this dog. Process of elimination not much was left.
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