The Neverending Story

I am wondering why they are now trying to cut him up.. it doesnt really go with the story unless they are cutting a symbol or soemthing to track him... maybe planting some kind of detector beacon in his skin.. someplace.

And he has a pistol? that would make everything so convinient when he was getting the crap beat out of him... :/ lol - oh well.

ne ways.. guess i will add

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The aliens in great horror and frustration - watched the silvery panel blow and the many cages that lined the walls of the hell like room open. The aliens ran out of where John was - it seemed as if they were going to guard the door to make sure none of the captives where released, though before any of them could manage to get to the door - they were pumelled by a large dog like creature that had fangs sticking out of the temples of the creatures head. The fangs empelled two of the guards, one through the side - and other through the chest.

John seeing is opportunity to get out of the room jumped to his feet only to be grabed by one of the captives.

"I thank you for your heroric acts! And to repay you" the large man said, "I shall help you get out of this hell bound ship." The man had blue skin, and 4 arms, though these words came to comfort john.

"Thank yo.." Though before John could finish the man grabbed his arm and they ran out of the room.


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Alright see what you can come up with hope no one posted as i was :/ lol

(Apoc)

No where during the story did it mention that they checked him nor did it say what he had on him or wearing, so I improvised And I really never said they were going to cut him up! Just kinda left that to interpratation

lol ok - at the beginning - i thought he was taking a bath... though i might have pictured this wrong... lol - oh well. I figured a naked man being sucked up by a tractor beam would be kinda odd... lol...

now reading of my story - dang i have some typos in there... lol - oh well. well- now add to the story

~Achithyn

as they ran out of the room, they ran down a long corridor covered in waht seemed to be yellow neon words. As they ran down a seemingly endless corridor, John asked "where are you taking me?" with no answer the man that he saved, said nothing and kept running.

With a slew of alien people not far behind, John and his new found friend came upon a door. No knob nor no keypad to speak of, "We are screwed now" John said . Without saying a word, the four armed man ran twon of his hands over the door and it opened instantly. John paused to take a breath, thinking they were safe for just a second, and then the door started to open! The two companions ran through a maze of neon colored corridors until they reached what seemed tlike a dead end! "What the hell do we do now?" John manged to mutter as he gasped for air. All the four armed man did was smile, looked at the wall and....





I might not be the best at this, but damn its fun

yeah thats the point of it all its just fun - nothing like we are going to publish this or anything... lol.. well lets see what we can come up with... "i am really a fantasy writer.. "

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John looked shocked at the blue mans smile. Why is he smiling? We are clearly going to be slautered like pig here in a sec!

The man pointed down to where there was small piece of equipment, and then picked it up. "This here my friend, is a teleporting device! So, just hold on."

John grabbed hold of the blue man, and just as he did - a pack of seven large aliens busted into the room just as the roomed turned all blurish and disfigured. A large gust of wind felt like it was swirling around John, he grabbed tighter to the blue man to make sure he was not sucked off to some wierd place. Just as his grasp seemed to loosen a bit, the room came back into view, though to what John saw - was not a room even close to what they used to be in...

"I am Amilo," the blue man spoke. "I have been trying to get out of that jail for the past 7 months! and ever since, my crew has been here waiting for me."

John turned arround to the sound of doors sliding open, a whole ton of people entered, they were all colored slightly blue until a girl, or what seemed to be a girl walked in; she was colord a light red...

"Welcome back captain! It is all to good to see you again! oh.." the man said, just barely noticing John.. "and who might this be?"

"This," Amilo said with a large grin, "This is my new friend, umm.."

"John," pipped in john..

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(Avar)

I suppose it would be out of line to cange this to a fantsy theme???

and.. sundenly.. a large blur of lights and stuff flashed about.. then when it all stoped - their stood a mage wielding a fire ball... "You stupid future people! Get out of my fantasy world!"

hehe - lol. I dont think it would work right...

(Avar)

Actually it could work if it went smething like this: as John said his name, there was a bright light and he went dizzy. While dazed and out, he thought about where he wanted to be most, home. Differnt things raced thru his mind as he tried to make sense of what has happened, then suddnely, he awoke..In a lush forest, green like he had never seem before. Trees seemed to be talking to him and life just seemed a little better. "Follow the river to the north" a tiny little voice said. Not knowing why, John listens and follows a tiny stream north. As he travels his loney path, abd having no clue what has just has happend, he stumbles on a particullaly green knoll and decdes to sleep.



See! It can be done! lol Not in the greatedt way but it can be

thats good.. lol - well - shall we continue off of that? hehe - that would make an interesting story, well - i dont have time to add to the story this night - though i will be back to check its progress so, everyone! check it out! add to this "fantasy" hehe - hf all!

~Achithyn (Avar)

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Wake up! Wake up, John!

John opened his eyes and looked at Anilo's worried face.

I have to get back to my ship - John mumbled

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Please stay on the topic :P